Tsubame Gaeshi

[Kaoru]

Name: Tsubame Gaeshi

Requirements: None, just require a weapon of any kind.

Class: Purely Offensive

Element: N/A (Yes People! Pure technique!)

Effect:
Do note that the sword is just a basic weapon to be used but Kaoru can also use other weapons to use this technique as well. The damage and speed of this technique’s execution is phenomenal and indescribable as it bypasses both physical armor and magical/energy armor, no matter what kind of material or energy is used to enhance it. Distance, space, sight, purely undetectable invisibility is also not an issue with this technique, due to the Multi-Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon which creates openings to parallel universes, Kaoru is able to detect you even if your body, spirit or any kind of power which makes you invisible in this universe but on the other he can still sense it. Literally speaking, it hits where it hurts aka Pure Damange.

It is possible to break out of the technique but this requires great amounts of concentration not to mention a high speed to break off from it. Dodging is also possible but it depends on the luck, agility and flexibility of a person. The minimum slashes for this technique is three while the maximum is ten. It also drains tremendous amounts of energy on Kaoru thus Kaoru needs to let his body rest or not to strain it much for three posts before he could use this again.

History:
Kaoru didn’t really receive this skill it’s just something that Kaoru was playing with and tried with some worthless demons. He was fond of playing the one on one battle as that was much more his forte than that of area damage techniques. Kaoru rarely use this skill though, making it a sight to behold once he unleashes it. Kaoru did give this statement to a demon before it died by his hands. “There is no escape.. The more you run.. The more I have fun in killing you..”

[Ezrion Alexander]

If you were to go up agaianst someone ese who could travel through dimensions (practically everyone on this site) and they block the slash in the other dimension, would it still continue into this one? Or would the other two slashes continue? And how does in pass armor? Your driscription isn't clear enough.

[Kaoru]

The problem now is can they? As I know, we all are dimensional travellers, blocking is possible but the possibility for that is low but still possible. Yes the two other slashes will continue. As to block it you need to know the mechanism of how Kaoru uses it first. Well that’s my way of thinking.

Ahh the passing armor part.. Physical is actually very easy to explain as armor be it large or small has spaces in between them, this skill literally makes the term “Space” non-existent, opening the doors of infinite possibilities for this technique to hit its target. The magical/energy armor is the tricky part to explain. Imagine this, as you have a magical armor used on yourself, when an attack comes to you, the attack will be merely stoped before hitting your skin but remember as this technique literally makes “Space” non-existent it creates what we will call a tiny, minute portal, gap, opening, whatever you call it, to make the damage able to pass the armor.

[Ezrion Alexander]

If someone were to detect this portal,opening or whatever you wish to call it, would they be able to seal it?

[Kaoru]

Possible but let me ask.. How many can you seal, plus as all of us can open portals and maintain our own portals. But the main thing is the portals only open when the sword starts to swing or the technique starts to initiate, thus the time interval between the portal opening and the sword swinging is nearly and very close instantaneous. Shall I state a weakness if you want to make this skill less G-mod in a way?

[Renzenku]

I'm heading this question since I noted something about this technique; You do need to tone down its capabilities. You can't be allowed to have a move that not only is impossible to dodge; but is impossible to block with anything physical or magical. That needs to be edited to be less G-Mod.

State what weakness you think may work to make this balanced but it is far to powerful as of this moment. In fact up until the part where you said it's impossible to dodge with anything physical or magical it sounded like a normal combo that you made extremely hard to dodge.

[Kaoru]

Possible to dodge but as you can see.. Where will the strike or slash hit? That is the main question but I’ll state where I hit of course. As for the weakness, I can’t really state all but I’ll state two. First, this technique requires a level of foundation to execute it. Second, I can’t use it while in mid-air or any other weapon other than a sword or blade which is without enhancements (meaning that no other skill, technique and sword abilities are all nullified during this technique).

[Renzenku]

Can it be blocked with a physical blade or physical armour?

If not is there a logical reason for this?

[Kaoru]

Ahh.. Well it's simple, as you know this technique uses the Multi-Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon which essentially creates openings into parallel universes, thus eliminating the term of "Space". As we know that Armor has some parts or "spaces" in between them from our skin thus the attack can literally bypass a physical blade or armor.

[Renzenku]

You're making a move that once it connects can be unlimitly strung as a massive combo and be impossible to break out of or dodge or block. Just so you know.

[Solomon Black]

I will not approve this as it is. Change it to make it possible to dodge, block, break out of once it goes off. Also give it a length, like can nly be used up to ten slashes, and needs a cooldown period.

[Kaoru]

Added this:

It is possible to break out of the technique but this requires great amounts of concentration not to mention a high speed to break off from it. Dodging is also possible but it depends on the luck, agility and flexibility of a person. The minimum slashes for this technique is three while the maximum is ten. It also drains tremendous amounts of energy on Kaoru thus Kaoru needs to let his body rest or not to strain it much for three posts before he could use this again.

Would this suffice?

[Renzenku]

Yes it will. But you may want to edit the first paragraph to make it fit:

Originally it was a sword attack technique that consists of three literally concurrent slashes. It is not inevitable just highly unlikely, you have no escape from this technique. Once it’s activated as it utilizes the Multi-Dimensional Refraction Phenomenon which essentially create openings into parallel universes, thus one can interact with the other sides with this gap. The three slashes are only the standard number of slashes of this technique (meaning he can do more). Furthermore, Kaoru can utilize this technique by using stabs, feints and any other ways of using the sword.

Probably be best to completely remove that paragraph instead of putting Original in front of it.

[Kaoru]

Bump

[Renzenku]

Approved I suppose; but as always abuse of this technique may get it removed from your ability.

[Kaoru]

Noted.. >.> Although i havent use any skills yet..

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